37 Bad touch

posted February 22nd, 2013, 8:45 am

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February 22nd, 2013, 8:49 am

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Soooo apparently some of my friends who read this had no idea this was a flash-back explaining how Alita somehow acquired magic, and I don't know if it's because I am really bad at explaining things or not, so UHM I hope you guys weren't too confused during this bit.

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February 22nd, 2013, 10:48 am

msad99

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@ten-diadems: It seemed like a flash back because of the change in knowledge of magic and the like.
It was however not very noticable until that played a part.
There were no obvious parts, which screamed flash back however.

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February 22nd, 2013, 4:58 pm

Silver Crescent

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I've known it was a flashback since it started. I'm not sure if you edited the page but when it starts theres a little panel that says '6 months earlier' .

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February 22nd, 2013, 7:22 pm

wandering-dreamer (Guest)

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I figured out it was a flashback since those girls know each other in the present but are clearly meeting for the first time here.

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February 23rd, 2013, 12:58 pm

Mr. Henry

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So it's a store that can only be noticed by those who should enter, but Terri noticed the store first. Does that mean she'll be coming back here any time in the future to get the same sort of powers???

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February 23rd, 2013, 5:55 pm

ten-diadems

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@Mr. Henry: Actually, Alita had to point the store out to Terri first. Terri just suggested they enter first.

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February 24th, 2013, 7:22 am

Mr. Henry

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@ten-diadems: Whoops, I forgot that's how it happened

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